The Chronicles of Loth page 5 chapter 1

Thursday, the 14th of May at 11:00 PM, 2009 in The Beginning
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The Chronicles of Loth page 5 chapter 1

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mirlinthloth Sunday, the 13th of September at 3:54 AM, 2009 edit delete
The problem with story heavy comics is trying to give the right amount of plot without bogging down the flow of the story and boring the audience. Also the comical expression of Loth helps to ease the reader into the comic.


N3M3515 Monday, the 21st of June at 11:26 PM, 2010 edit delete reply
Agreed, I think you did a very good job on this.
Elegy Friday, the 25th of June at 3:47 PM, 2010 edit delete reply
Honestly, the lack of detail or action DURING the detail of the story is what bores the reader. Showing something to illustrate what the writing is saying makes it fun to read...rather than just angle shots of a girl walking down a hall.