The Chronicles of Loth page 101 chapter 11

Friday, the 20th of December at 1:00 AM, 2013 in The Scales of Valor
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The Chronicles of Loth page 101 chapter 11

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EFlint Friday, the 20th of December at 1:00 AM, 2013 edit delete
EFlint
So I just realized last week was a Friday the 13. With as much time I spend online I'm really surprised that slipped by me. Anyway the point is I don't have much to talk about. TWC Image is Cerene and Ral. Not like that. Every now and then I need to do a safe for work vote image.
J. E. Flint Monday, the 23rd of December at 7:21 AM, 2013 edit delete
J. E. Flint
Good morning everyone,

I wanted to share a gift with everyone who can read this.

I have made my first novel free to download on the kindle. If you're interested go http://www.amazon.com/True-Blue-Alien-Digital-Memories-ebook/dp/B00FIOXATG. It will be free from 12/23 to 12/27. I wanted to make it free for the 12 days of christmas but Amazon wouldn't let me do that. So I guess five days during x-mas will have to do.

If you don't have a kindle but still want to read it you can always download it and then go to https://read.amazon.com, to get The Amazon Cloud Reader.

Anyway enjoy your holiday. Hope you enjoy the book.

Comments:

Erik Friday, the 20th of December at 5:56 AM, 2013 edit delete reply
Did she really not notice he was carving out runes?
The_Rippy_One Friday, the 20th of December at 11:30 AM, 2013 edit delete reply
Ral just runed the grounds...hope the gardeners don't get mad...
Guesticus Friday, the 20th of December at 11:33 AM, 2013 edit delete reply
Bet he was _counting_ on her defenses helping
Guesticus Friday, the 20th of December at 11:35 AM, 2013 edit delete reply
Who is the one saying "Incoming."? If it is Ral, the word-tail should be pointing off-panel (or at least, away from Harpy)
Erik Saturday, the 21st of December at 6:02 AM, 2013 edit delete reply
I think she said incoming, since Ral is the one who gets blasted in the last panel.
Guesticus Saturday, the 21st of December at 10:21 AM, 2013 edit delete reply
That explosion was his doing, not hers (she is either in the middle of it, or doing a Team Rocket away from it)
Ed8 Saturday, the 21st of December at 4:54 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
Upon further consideration, I think you're correct, and she's in the middle of it. Still not sure who said incoming, though.
Guesticus Friday, the 20th of December at 11:39 AM, 2013 edit delete reply
Looks like you may have the invotive backwards: shouldn't Ral be the 'frowny-face' and Celene the 'happy-face'?
Ed8 Saturday, the 21st of December at 4:53 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
That's what I thought too, unless I am misunderstanding what the frowny/happy faces are supposed to mean.
EcchiKitty Friday, the 20th of December at 7:46 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
Not sure the order here... did his rays carve the ground and then fly at her, or did the rays hit her shield and then the ground? Also not sure who said 'incomming'.
Ed8 Saturday, the 21st of December at 4:52 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
I'm going to say that Ral fired the rays at her shield and they bounced off and inscribed the explosive runes in the ground around her, perhaps even amplified by her shield, which was his intent all along. The runes then did their job and exploded, and Ral is being thrown back because, as with his previous spell, the spell seems to be a lot more powerful than he was expecting it to be.
Guesticus Saturday, the 21st of December at 10:22 AM, 2013 edit delete reply
Just noticed that there is a 'vorp' missing: 5 on the left, but only 4 on the right
Ed8 Saturday, the 21st of December at 4:48 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
Does that make this a Vorpal spell?
J. E. Flint Saturday, the 21st of December at 11:37 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
J. E. Flint
That is a terrible pun Ed8. And I approve of it.
Some Lurker Sunday, the 22nd of December at 12:31 AM, 2013 edit delete reply
Honestly, it looks like Ral got blasted in the back by the fire part of her spell. Just a guess, based largely on the angle of his hair and legs/feet compared to the explosion, and her comment.
Frankhw Sunday, the 22nd of December at 8:39 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
Ral was blasted back but I see four mostly identical explosions. I can only guess it was from Ral dispelling the enchantment.
Ed8 Monday, the 23rd of December at 10:24 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
Thanks for the free E-book! Now I feel bad that I didn't get you anything. :(

My next mission: try to find time to read a book....
J. E. Flint Monday, the 23rd of December at 10:39 PM, 2013 edit delete reply
J. E. Flint
Honestly Ed8, just picking up the book and reading it's all I need. The artist told me that it's a shame I don't have the second or third parts ready yet... I'm terrible at editing cause I don't want to take anything out.
The True Blue Alien Universe is as big if not bigger than the Chronicles of Loth Universe. I've just got to find time to write it so you guys can read it.