The Chronicles of Loth page 4 chapter 9

Thursday, the 26th of April at 10:36 PM, 2012 in The Scales of Antiquity
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The Chronicles of Loth page 4 chapter 9

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EFlint Thursday, the 26th of April at 10:36 PM, 2012 edit delete
EFlint
Kinuko is ready for action! And Ral reminds everyone he’s a thief. What will our heroes do? Oh that’s right, you can just click next and find out since we got one more page! I don’t really have much to say on this one.

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Slight Error Saturday, the 28th of April at 10:26 PM, 2012 edit delete reply
Kinuko claims her purse "as is heavy as her fist". Slight editing error, or is Kinuko messing up her speech due to the residual effects of her healing?
J. E. Flint Sunday, the 29th of April at 7:38 AM, 2012 edit delete reply
J. E. Flint
It was more meant to imply that she had no money and that they should take a more direct approach getting the answers they want.
There are times when it's difficult to convey in a short amount of words what Kinuko means. This might be one of those cases.
With that explanation does it make it easier to understand?

And you're right of course, the AS and IS should be switched. We'll fix that asap.
LazyRanger Sunday, the 9th of December at 1:26 AM, 2012 edit delete reply
I think the problem is that we associate Kinuko as being a "heavy hitter", so to speak, so when she compares her fists which hit heavy to a purse, it implies not that she has very little money, but actually has a ton.

I have no clue how you'd fix it, though. :/